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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　Some people think that lucky numbers will bring good luck, like 6 ,8 ,9 and so on . So when they do something , they tend to select the day which contains these number to start or end . For example , the day contained 6 don’t leave home and the day contained 8 don’t go home.  What’s more , when they buy goods ,they tend to select the code which consists of these lucky numbers . For example , code of their new mobile phone or their new car .

　　I think the number isn’t related to fortune , On the contrary , I think the one recipe for good luck lies in hard study and work . That people who think lucky numbers will bring good luck are entirely cheating themselves. No pains, No gains. If you keep daydreaming you’ll never achieve anything.

　　To sum up ,  The thinking that “Lucky Numbers” can bring good luck isn’t reasonable, Good luck and success is only attained by hard study and work .

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