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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　Some people support some numbers can bring good luck. They believe that it is beneficial in many ways. Vary from person to person. Others, however , hold the opposite view. Weighing the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree with the latter.

　　In the first place, number is just only number .It does not bring us what we want to. Many people think that number six or eight may take them fortune. In fact, the number have nothing to do with fortune. In the second place, luck need our effort .For example, if you do your best for your job, you can be stepped up   luckly . The luck belongs to you .Last but not least, some number not only bring us luckless but also suffer us  some troubles. Some people hope that their private cars’cards or the floors of the departments have number six or eight and so on , but these may take them some inconvenience.

　　As far as I am concerned, I think that lucky numbers have not bring good luck.

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