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　　With the development of the economy and the industry in our country ,there is no denying the fact that there are an increasing number of people who rush into cities eah year.It has been a hotly debated topic in the daily life. 
    
　　A number of problems have been resulted from this phenomenon,but the following are the critical ones.In the first place, many farmers did not want to do the farm work instead of working in the factory,in order to own more money.So a lot of agriculture land is lying waste.In the second place,the population of city is sharply increased.So people can not use the limited resouce effectively,which includes the house,public transit and so on.Last but not least,this population rush caused the imbalance development between the city and the country.
   
　　To sum up ,we should not go to extremes on this matter.We may furthur develop the agriculture,in order to making farmers earn more money from the farm work.So that the citizens both in the city and the country can have a happy life.

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